I'd suggest toning some of the white on the top menu bar down and maybe moving your planes slightly to the lef so they cover less text area. Maybe change the blue stream to orange like the one in Nibris but that's not really important. If you can, you should try to make the text area bigger for practical reasons. And maybe include some text in the text area so we can have a good idea of what the interface would look like on the web.
dla mnie lewa strona jest trochę za ciężka...... zrównoważyłbym ją jakims akcentem....... i chyba faktycznie ten samolot troche zbyt agresywanie wchodzi na pole tekstowe...., które na mój gust ma wsytarczające rozmiary.... ale tak to git..... świetny ten koleś w lewym górnym rogu......
a great aspect of design and web design is the right use of space
try use more screens space to represent the most important content which is ussually textual info, not images
Love it... I don't really think you should give 'more space', per-se, to the information. Nowadays to pay attention to something it should look nice... and this looks awesome. Still, i hope you're not getting toys or candy information into it
GOOD JOB!
I forgot! I don't know if you knew about this, but the space you left for the info is located exactly were the human eye has more attention when looking at something, so you won't be getting any trouble with the images around it... jsut try not using fonts smaller than 8pts.
Hope I helped
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I'd suggest toning some of the white on the top menu bar down and maybe moving your planes slightly to the lef so they cover less text area. Maybe change the blue stream to orange like the one in Nibris but that's not really important. If you can, you should try to make the text area bigger for practical reasons. And maybe include some text in the text area so we can have a good idea of what the interface would look like on the web.
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try use more screens space to represent the most important content which is ussually textual info, not images
and don't forget I hate tiny fonts
GOOD JOB!
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